Notes on articles about technical communication
Conrad
OK, here we go:
First of all let me say that I find it extremely difficult to
come up any criteria to evaluate a talk. I have attended various
talks where the speakers clearly violated many of the 'don'ts'
that I read about in some of the online texts. And those were
still highly entertaining talks.
To me the two things that can make all the difference are the
personality of the speaker, and of course the content of the
talk. On top of that, one always has to take into account the
level of difficulty: some talks may be boring to me, even though
Bryant and Stern and others may find them extremely
interesting. But after all, they know a little more differential
geometry than I do.
I read the following articles:
Charles Loan, a short talk:
This one is fairly short and hence also my first choice. The
author lists a few valuable do's and don'ts, he discusses the
importance of short talks and how easy it is to mess it up. On the
other hand, there isn't anything new here: of course a short talk
is all about advertising your own research. And the conclusion
says it all: in the end it takes practise.
The next one was Kolda:
Well, this one seems to be all about power point
presentations. Applied mathematicians may find this one quite
appealing but to me it seems less suitable for pure people. But
again, apart from the latex advise, there isn't really anything
exciting in this text either. Kolda points out many obvious things
about talks. For instance, would anybody really forget to bring
their computer to a computer talk? And would anyone really stand
in front of the screen rather than next to it?
The last text was Mark Hill's oral presentation advise:
He has a fairly useful conference talk outline: and that's
about it. Because apart from that there is nothing on the
page. Except for the ten commandments at the bottom of the page
the summarize how to give a bad talk. And to be honest, some of
them sound quite convincing. For instance number two: using less
transparencies does save you money: around $7 per year is already
a lot for poor graduate students like us. That, together with a
car insurance from Geico can save you some valuable cash.
Drea
So I ventured off the list on the course webpage just to
shake things up a bit.
Website #1: Bob Geroch's Suggestions for Giving Talks
This site really stressed the importance of organization in a
talk. It must have been geared toward longer talks, because he
suggested breaking the talk up into 3 main points that could stand
alone as short talks themselves. I liked the suggestion of keeping
the audienced informed and constantly reminding them of where
you're going in the talk. One debatable point was that equations
should be a last resort for expressing an idea. I liked this site,
because he emphasizes making a talk accessible to an audience.
Website #2: How to Give a Good Talk by Joseph Gallian (article from Math
Horizons)
This article was geared towards undergraduates, and it had a
lot of preparation suggestions that I found useful. As far as
suggestions for our critique sheet, I think providing context for
your talk and relating your topic to other fields are very
important if possible. He also suggested showing enthusiasm for
the subject because it energizes the audience. This article was
useful because it emphasized how a speaker should feed off of the
audience and adapt to the reactions they give.
Website #3: Ten Secrets to Giving a Good Scientific Talk
This website had a lot of the same stuff as the previous two,
however it had some good suggestions on fielding questions. The
main point was to be personable when taking questions. Repeat the
question to buy you time and to clarify. Admit you don't know if
you don't know the answer. Don't argue with a questioner.
Questions are a good sign that you have stimulated the audience
and a good indication of the points you have not communicated
clearly.
One suggestion that came up in a couple of the websites was
to do a self-evaluation after you have given a talk, which seems
like a very useful thing to do to polish your public speaking
skills.
Jason
After reviewing several articles, I have concluded that
giving talks is likely a lot like playing chess. Learning the
basic moves is easy but the mastery will come from experience.
Article 1:
This is a short but useful article. It stresses the idea of
focusing your talk around a "take-away message" which are the 3 or
4 most important points you are trying to communicate. It goes on
to explain how to structure your talk around this idea.
The article also gives many useful slide tips such as having
a few blank sides to go over unanticipated material that comes up
during questions. One of my favorite lines in the paper is "Don't
fiddle with your pointer, as telescoping it in and out really
detracts from what you are saying".
Article 2:
There is so much to this article, I will only give a few
notes. It gives a few useful ideas of how to deal with a combined
group of experts and nonexperts. It has a detailed section on
visual aids including very specific guidelines including how best
to incorporate color. The statement "do not read your talk from
slides" is perhaps the single best piece of advice. Finally,
there is useful information for dealing with a Q&A
session.
Article 3:
Because it is the summary of a book, this "bullet" list is
rather dense. I have seen most of the ideas in this article in
other sources, and quite a bit of it is common sense. One
interesting idea that it contains is to "phrase the basic idea
underlying the talk as a question". According to the auther the
most imporant rule for a scientific presentation is "to finish on
time and on a clear and resonant note". I tend to agree with this
as I have witnessed a many a talk fall apart as the speaker
attempted to cram an hour worth of material into the 5-10 extra
minutes beyond the stopping time.
Kwan
I found this article most useful. Its informal and humorous
phrases make it actually fun to read. Also I think giving tips on
how to give a bad talk is a very innovative idea to drive home the
(opposite) main points. It covers contents and organazation of
the materials, rhetorical techniques, and common etiquettes to
please the audience.
This article is more detailed and serious-minded than the
previous one. It is a little dry but is full of useful tips which
I would have never thought of. Some of them are subtle (e.g. "Do
not fixate on a V.I.P. who happens to be in attendance"), and some
of them are just common sense.
Awfully boring to read. Its advices are often too vague and
sometimes questionable (e.g. "Use landscape orientation", "don't
put slides in plastic"). On the other hand, its usage of Latex is
a marvel to behold. I didn't know Latex could handle presentation
this well.
Shu Dai
Anthony